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This was a fun speech to look into further. It changed my
perspective even more then before about how many different interests can become
huge radical movements, if we get enough people on board… Crazy ideals or not..
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Ryan Fochtman’s speech was a really close first
contender in my eyes as well! His topic was informative, grabbed my
attention from the start, and he seemed to really understand what he was
talking about with compassion.
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I also really enjoyed the attention hook Conner
Thomson used when he threw all the loose change on the desk! He definitely grabbed
my attention and kept me till the last word. As well as following through when
one of his slides didn’t show up during the presentation.. I would of $#!+
myself or possibly even stopped talking completely if I was stuck up there impromptu.
High five for following through and feeling comfortable enough to keep going
even when you got stuck.
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Well off the bat I need to collect myself a lot more,
or maybe just stop syking myself out so hard. Calm my heart rate/ blood pressure,
collect my thoughts, taking one word at a time, and presenting myself right
then and now, finding my person at that present moment. First off cut the caffeine
completely days of speeches. It doesn’t help! Next I look at the speech before
hand as a hugee endeavor, and then in the process of speaking I’m usually just subconsciously
hoping those five minutes will run out a little faster. Or Castle will hold up
that 4-minute marker one minute earlier. I’m running high speed everywhere, my
heart my wrists the backs of my knees, the worst part is my chest, I literally
look down every time before I start to talk and see my heart about to burst out
of my chest. Then my ADHD/ dyslexia head is going a mile a minute, making my tongue
trip over its own words. I can speak in
smaller group settings with ease and comfortably, but when it comes to being
front and center stage talking about something in specifics, or hoping I come
off with enough clarity for the audience to understand me is my biggest
concern.
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Okay, just rereading my start commentary,
I need to calm down. Quit stressing so hard on what everyone else is thinking
about what I’m saying. Most people aren’t really taking in 100% of what you’re
saying anyways, but all in all come off like you know what you’re talking about.
Will someone please slap my hand or shock me every time I say “UMM” or “UHH” in
my next speech!... I just wanted to slap myself after watching the video over
and over. I stopped counting at 15.. bad bad and so inarticulate, I really need
to work on that.
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SO being Italian,
the hand gestures are a blessing that come naturally, but the podium has become
a comfort zone, which I need to step away from and try to pace in front of the
audience a bit more. But I try to be as prepared as possible with my visual presentation
so that there are no mess ups that can be avoided. AS well I’m not the most
tech savy person, as you may know, so I try to stay ahead of the game instead
of procrastinating till the last minute.
I always enjoy your presentations because you act them out in a way that is so captivating. From your Oscars Speech to your Seaworld Speech and even this last speech you present in a way that shows you’ve definitely done your research on the topic. You have a very creative way of writing and I first noticed that when McCool and I were listening to your “Doctor’s Appointment” rough draft. I can definitely tell you are a writer and I look forward to your future speeches! I have to agree with you that your hand gestures were great and really helped to articulate what you were saying.
ReplyDeleteI thought your topic was the most relatable to the class. Everyone uses technology every day. Your hand gestures were on point, which added a lot to the persuasiveness of your radical idea. You use good ways to capture the classes attention in all of your speeches. In future speeches, maybe focus on tying together your hand gestures with altering your pitch and tone. Just a thought, but I think that it might elevate your public speaking to the next level. Overall, I thought that your speech was one of the best in the class, and I defintely agreed with your radical idea
ReplyDeleteI liked your topic which brings me to think I shouldn't use my phone that often when I am in front of people. We talked about this in our group discussion. Nowadays, there is a situation is when family get together for holiday, they always on their phone. People forget about how important about face to face communication. When you give the speech, I paid my 100% attention on you, because your hand gesture catches my attention, which I should learn from you. :)
ReplyDeleteI agree with LaQuay that the way you present your speeches is different than anyone else in class. You present in a pretty creative way by acting out what your presenting. I really liked your topic cause nowadays it seems like everyone is glued to their phones every second of the day. And its super dumb that is the norm now. I did get kinda mixed up during your speech tho. At times it was confusing but I got the point overall. Keep presenting the way you do cause its a lot more interesting to watch, nice work!
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