Prezi # 3 speech Radical

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I'm adding a little more... not exactly sure where yet... But I feel like just dumping all the commonalities and references to the  social aspect of life on the audience will, in a way, take their breath away.. feeling overwhelmed and unconsumed.. not wanting any further connections to such fake BS.

Speech # 3 Dump

I'm a very visual kind of person, my apologies for the chicken scratch.. I thought a brain dump that kind of categorized the different aspects in my head would make it easier to put them all in order.

Start,Stop,Continue

This speech was by far one of the hardest concepts for me to tie together for myself. First just trying to understand what we were expected to do, and then figuring out a scenario that I can easily and in somewhat of a "comfortable" setting, try to present just the conventions.
Walking onto stage center was a bit easier and more comfortable presenting myself to the audience, instead of just standing front center from the beginning. As well walking back and forth across stage helped my eye contact a little more, and helped the blood and Adrenalin pump to different parts of my body instead of heart center.
My biggest issue with public speaking is always thinking ahead of my words. I am thinking too quickly about what to say that my tongue gets tied and it turns into work jumble. I ended up reverting back to my waitress conventions and started speaking in a way that I am comfortable with on a daily basis. the word vomit is confusing not only to the audience but then I get messed up in my rhythm of the speech making it feel awkward, and very fake. Another thing is my tone of voice, I am not trying to come off as ingenue but the tone of my voice at some points feels like I'm more acting then relaying what actually needs to be said. Working on conveying the message clearer, and keeping with steady pace will help for a less awkward presentation, hopefully.
Trying to mingle with the audience, and keeping direct eye contact with their hair is a big factor in helping me for the next speech. I am excited I saw in the blog there's a persuasive speech... well those are by far my favorite if you couldn't tell from Speech #1. Engage, Engage, direct, continue.

Genre: Doctor Edition

• Walk into the lobby, anxious as ever!
• look around, find a directory, which floor?...
• Elevator doors open, packed & squeezed tightly 
• "level 7 please" trying not to touch shoulders with the germ infested man directly next to me (don't inhale his cough, breath through your mouth... wait I can contract it that way too) 
• keep pushing farther away from the sickling, moving closer to the gentleman sitting in the wheel chair, his eyes right at hip level
•  feeling his heavy breathing and his eyes crawl up my back. 
• *Push & shove "excuse us this is our floor" as the nurse hits the back of my ankle with the old mans foot rest attached to the wheel chair. 
• *elevator doors open, sign says: Chemotherapy
• Give the man eye contact and a head nod, a sign of good luck
• Doors close, motion upward, next illuminated number 3
• Open to the next sign: CAT SCAN 
• the gentleman that was coughing all over my personal bubble, gets off with hanker chief in hand covering his mouth looking as if he was about to cough again 
• "Have a beautiful day young lady" 
• the doors begin to shut again, realizing I'm the last remaining in the elevator 
• moving swiftly up the shafts to my designated floor
• the doors open wide, one more time, I look at the sign: OBGYN 
• This is the floor 
• walk into a LED lit room, lots of pregnant woman & screaming children 
• throwing magazines, seeking the attention of their parental 
• walk up to the receptionist "Hi I have an appointment", "Last name?" in a mutter, with little eye contact or even a slight lift of her head from her monitor. 
• "your appointments at 11:30, it's 11:15, there are a few people ahead of you" 
• " No problem, that's why I got here early" 
• Throwing a clip board over the counter "fill all the highlighted parts out, and bring it back to me when your done." 
•  Walking away from the counter, back into the chaos of mothers consoling children, and overdue pregnant women feeling the affects of there over bearing child laying low on their bladders. 
• I sit down beside mothers that allow the chairs to be used as a jungle gym for their hyperactive children 
• look down at the clip board
• papers read "change of residency" "has there been a change in your residency in the last year" check: No
• Change of insurance: check NO
• Change in Medication :NO
• Family History: oh God you expect me to know that in depth?!
• return the clipboard at 11:22
• Now go sit in the corner, far enough away from the child in the stroller pelting a magazine at the poor expecting mothers head.
• look around trying find something to distract you from your empathetic staring 'Oh look a magazine from 2011' 
• flip through it once, find some good articles
• go back to the beginning flip through it again
• read the pop culture articles from five years ago, refresh your memory on what was never important, like Beyonce's baby being born..
• next magazine... "how long have a I been waiting?" look at the clock
• Clock reads 11:50 
• 20 minutes late for my appointment 
• Start getting antsy 
• five more minutes pass 
• 11:55- Walk up to the counter, "Are the doctors running a little late today?" 
• "Yes, but your the next to be seen. Just have a seat you'll be taken care of soon"
• before sitting back down with the animals, I hear my name "Mackenzie?"
• Run over to the open door where the nurse stands and asks my date of birth. 
• 10/1/93 
• "can I get your height & weight"
• "Okay, I'll take you into this room now to get your blood pressure and have you answer a few questions"
• rap a Velcro band around my bicep, contracting till I feel the pulse in my arm 
• Blood Pressure :"normal"
• "any abnormal feelings" -"Feeling normal"
• "change in your medication/ or current meds that your on"
• how many alcoholic beverages per week?
• smoke?
• what?
• how much? 
• direct eye contact from the nurse, "It's bad for you, you should really try and stop" (obviously)
• "any specific reason why your here today?"
• just the annual check up
• "the doctor will be right in" 
• Panorama the new room
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Genre Speech #2 Outline

Mackenzie March                                                 Genre Speech

Leonardo DiCaprio finally wins an Oscar!

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• Grab the audience with a hook 
• Welcome the audience and all of the potential recipients of the award
• Corky comment about the runners/contestants
• Going from the general to more precise & intimate about the possibly winner
• The list of nominated people and what the reason for nomination
• Best Actor award
• Recognition 
• Specific movies/ gigs
• Good & bad parts or roles
• Any possible fuck ups or oops' they might of made
• Compare/relate the individuals to yourself
• Strengths & struggles 
• Media coverage 
• Drum role(pause)
• Announce the winner
• Round of applause 
• Hand shack/ hug recipient 

Speech Genre: Presenting a famous person with an Oscar for achievement in visual effects this Sunday!

First, I’ll walk on stage, huge smile, as the crowd applauses, I might join in the clapping for myself… Then I will tell the audience what specific category of award I will be presenting, possibly with a partnered host.

Got to grab the audience with a corky hook make em laugh

Take a huge pause… waiting for the laughter and applause to shush

Then recall back on a time when I was once in similar correlation with the contenders  

Maybe start talking about “the good ol’ days”

Banter back and forth, telling your co-host how good he is at doing his job, then he might throw some bs back at you like how dapper your looking this evening. Lighting up the room

Continue the smiles and fake appreciation for the other person more important that yourself that’s winning the award. Comment on how hard the work and time must have been salving away to make us these films.

Begin by announcing the category for the award  

“And the nominies for best visual effects are…”

1.

2.

3.

4.

5.

I will then open an envelope slowely, announcing “And the Oscar goes to…”

Trying to read the whole title, buried by applause, congratulate the winner and exit Stage right.  

SeaWorld Post-Speech Analysis

    My speech was more along the lines of a persuasive speech, rather than a pitch trying to be made to the CEO of Sea World. Watching my speech video was actually shocking, my public speaking abilities are not up to the confident level I assumed myself at. Disappointed in my attempts even to complete a proper sentence and stuttering over my own thoughts and words, was very embarrassing. The biggest problem I had was thinking too far ahead, making it hard for my tongue to formulate full sentences out loud.
   Seeing my attempts checked off in numbers on a page after watching the video multiple times, brought to my attention the over reliance for the note card, and how that changed the rhythmics of my speech.
   I guess in a way, I already saw my speech, not as a pitch, but an attempt to hypothetically and rhetorically change a persons (at a higher statures) mind about something. When money, and power are key factors of any conversation, its difficult to push through to someone, and some of those heart hitting facts are necessary in convincing the to change them from a one sided perspective to a well rounded view. Maybe saying "You are the cause for the maltreatment of these animals" was a bit harsh, but isn't honesty a better policy?! As well, this conversation was not supposed to be heard or directed to the audience. It was between a morally upset citizen and a man who is benefiting and grows financially daily off of the entertainment of living creatures. I have no more credibility in this matter then you or my own mother, but don't we all have hearts and eyes that see and feel the pain, not only physically but psychologically that these animals are dealing with on a daily basis.
   Having a reading disabilities makes it harder to use a note card I think, and because of that from now on I need to take the time not to focus on writing down the note card at hand, but to memorize and practice multiple times, days in advance to be better prepared. And maybe I'll use a classmate next time to direct the conversation in that direction rather then aimlessly at the class itself. I got so much more nervous seeing so many eyes looking at me.
   This speech did not have a real goal or purpose of conversation, I more or less just bumped into him and started railing him with facts... I'm not the kind of person who small talks really in any situation, if I have a point it is to be made and that's it, you won't hear my voice till the next fact is valid. I see that demeanor in other individuals as well, especially if passionate about a subject (AKA my family). There is not much room in edge wise with people that "know what they're talking about". Sea World understands and has been practicing entertainment for years now. That is there money maker, these third party perspectives are what keep the balance. Almost like Church & State, but more humbling... kind of.

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Elevator Pitch Draft #1

I am currently stuck in an elevator with Joel Manby, the CEO of Sea World in San Diego. He just finished up a press conference at the Convention Center, discussing the future progression of Sea World and what there plans are for the near future.

Well Mr. Manby, that was quit a exhilarating speech you did there. But I have a few questions for you while were here...
I understand and have seen first hand how, financially impacting "Black Fish" was for your company, After hearing you explain a little bit of what your planning on doing for future days, where in any of that speech did you actually discuss the whales in any way or even take the time to discuss trying to enhance the well being and living environments of those animals in your possession.
I'm curious to hear from your mouth what you believe is right and wrong when you look around your park? Don't you wish your children could witness these majestic creatures breaching out of the waters they're native too? And no, I need to clarify this with you, these whales have been phyically harmed by YOU, and the maltreatment of your company. If you would have left them where they belong, you would never see Killer Whales dying at ages a quarter of what is naturally expected to. Putting the orcas into a natural ocean pen would benefit them incredibly. I have no idea where you got this conception, but the natural balance of the ocean would help the aminals feel in some ways more natural, and giving them back their natural environment!
Stokes plummeted when "Black Fish" came to the public, and hearing your plan for expansion of the tanks is a small plus, Yes, but why spend $300 million on tank expansions when that money could go to the research and development for a protected natural pen somewhere off one of our coast lines. Can't you imagine how absloutely thrilled an animal of that capacity would be, going out into the wild learning how to hunt, and swim like real living whales do.
your impact has been made to the public whether you expected it to be positive or not, but the ball is in your court sir whether you want to play the game of God or not is up to you. Continue to do your research and help the Marine Biology Community, but consider changing your path from entertainment to the well being of these beautiful creatures.






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